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Tuesday, May 26, 2009 making-sweetness

Assignments

When i was eleven , i came to this country with my parents. We were ready to see my uncle, and the he gave my father a big hug to welcome us. It was at around 9:00 p.m. at the back gate of the airline. I looked anxious about what we were going to do next. Later on, we were sitting in my uncle's car to get a place to rest. In fact, our relatives were waiting for us to celebrate the reunion of a huge family. My pleasant relatives thought my father wanted to sleep in a hotel that night, so the young brother of my father invited us to their pretty house to a surprise party. IN a few hours, we arrived at their fantasy living place which made me not want to leave the surrounding areas they have. My aunts, cousins, and other uncles were being friendly to ask how we had done in the past few years. Finally, i had fun spending time with them and ate the most delicious Western food on the first day here.
Their different ideas take them to arguments. Each of them is faking with other one as she treats her well. One is an addict to the wild party life, and the younger has a book worms personality. They both wear the outfits which they want but do not agree with each other. They never call each other sister even though the parents tell them to. On the other hand, they are competing to know which is the winner in school. Lauren always wants to have an attractive lover, but Kim already has a greedy one. She is jealous of Lauren and wants to steal her boyfriend. Kim knows Lauren is more talented than her so she plans to spread bad rumors among her friends. In the end, they both get a kick out of their wealthy families.
She wants to be her own boss. We hope to show what happens to this young lady. This occurs to the most eighteen-years-old who choose to escape.It is a big world to conquer. She is idealistic and more than ready.
Danny does not like obeying her parents. She is sure she can control her own life. With her small amount of sayings, one goal is to find a cheap apartments. This mature one is lucky to have a part-time job which she hats. It is her first time to rent a place to live. In addition, she has other secret problems. One of them is money. There is no way she can pay her bills with her present income. With a high school diploma, she thinks she has to get full-time work. As a result, her good skills in bookkeeping allow her to find a position with better pay.
She is learning from living alone. It is difficulty for her to pay all the bills. She and Alice, her best friend agree to share living quarters. The two together earn enough to make ends meet. Finally, they see that freedom costs a lot.
Haha The last one is kind of similar to me if my education isn't going the way to college. XP

posted at 9:07 PM making-sweetness

Friday, May 15, 2009 making-sweetness

Another sample essay & summaries from him

OH, the reason why it is from that teacher, because I'm take that class after school to improve my English. Oh Yes, I'm passing the freaking English CAHSEE ♪♫ ^__^ Yeah

" Swadding Clothes is a tragedy by Yukio Mishima. The drama develop in Tokyo shorty after World War II. Toshiko and the baby were the major character. The author pointed out a big problem in Japanese tradition. The illetimate child has already been condemned for the errors of its unmarried father and mother. For this reason, the actor's wife became miserable. She could not stop worrying about the bastard. She went alone for a walk late at night in Ueno Park. She encountered a young man covered in newspaper asleep on a bench. Lastly, he grabbed her arm and a new romance began.
" The Feud" is a tragedy written by Saki. The action took place in the Black Forest in Germany about a hundred years ago. The major character George Stern, and Eric van Riken, the pack of wolves, and the oak tree. These families have been fighting over ownership of a piece of land of property. As a result, they had become bitter enemies. One windy evening the opposing men entered the disputed forest land. A giant oak fell down upon them. Trapped, they became friends. In the end, they were helpless and attacked and eaten by the wild hungry animal.

Opposite Ideas Make Enemies

Angel at Risk and Houdinia have a strong attraction to each other. They remain together for a long time. Our goal is to show what happens to a wrong kind of romance. Perhaps this situation tells us why there are so many divorces. A failed relationship too often becomes a tragedy.
These lovebirds have several similarities . Both are what we call applealing characters. We like to see their faces and pleasant smiles. They look so happy, like no problem can come between them. For examples, they go to parties every week. Their friends are too many, and their bills out of control. Expensive vacations are their favorite activities . In addition, their clothing is better than that of famous movies stars.
Emotional differences take over their lives. Each has a secret numbers of sweethearts. Sometimes they encounter one another by chance. This is when the disputes begin. Sometimes they encounter one another by chance. Angel and H. discover they are losing something. This love affair is in trouble. Their ideas often oppose each other as well.
Most mirrage are not forever. Many result in divorce. Because of so many fights over dollars, they hate the sight of one another. The new world is avoidance. In the end, they choose to go in opposite
The Piece of String

" The Piece Of String" is a sorrowful story. It was written in olden times, in France, at a restaurant in spring time. The major characters in the plot were Mr. Haycorn, and Mr. Landin. Mr. Landin accused him of stealing the wallet from a farmer in the morning. In fact, Mr. Hacorn was an innocent old man who just found a twine. He tried to persuade the farmers that he didn't take the wallet several times. Later on, another farmer returned the item, but the farmers from the town still doubted Mr.Haycorn motive. The major felt very disgraced by the untruthful statement of the farmers. The plot made it so tense in the neighborhood hating others, and being insult by others wwhen the man did not do it. In conclusion, the protagonist died from a painful fever with no one believing him of just grabbing a piece of string. Hmm actually this one is one of my quizz haha just did the correct from my mistake~

Now go into the business letter assignment that had correct by him~
700 Spring St.
Los Angeles, CA 90012
May 6, 2009

Mr. Larson Hayden, Manager
1150 Sunset Blvd
Bombo Costili
Santa Monica, CA 90120

Dear Mr. Hayden

I am informing the readeer that I am not accepting this issue I have. There is someone at work doing something that I don't like. We have been working about a year, and contribute the ideas to the boss. At first, she treated me gentle like a sister. When I got on a problem doing a case for my client, she tried to help me, and acted like an angel. Then, I got a better idea and took it to the company. She was doing some unusual things such as telling offensive jokes, and threat me. She was becoming crazier, and interupted what I did in order to make herself feel good. I didn't what to do about her action, but she continued approaching and mocking me.

Please make her leave this place as soon as possible. She is full of high intrigue toward people when her colleague does better than her.

Sincerely,
Doan Su

The nation depends on several new kinds od technology. The whole world benefits from the internet. It helps us to do quickly things we could not do before. We have a number of space stations in orbit this planet. Tjey continue to do experiments for us twenty-four hours per day. In addition, there are three robots on or near Planet Mars. Much of our future is in the hands of robotic devices. Microsugery is being used to avoid cutting the human body. Tiny robots enter through the blood stream. Further more, our stealth aircraft is revolutionizing of flying machinese.

American Expresss
1234 Buscayne Road
Fast Lauderdale, Fl 22023j

Sir/Madam:

I write regarding way my card account no 66103 297 32006. We purchased two airline ticket round trip Los Angeles to Paris on April 02, 2009. Our receipt says the total costs was $2,655.41. Your monthly statement quotes the price as 3,162.38. We request an explaination of this difference.
Please send us a written response. 213-626-7151
Thank you
Sincerely
Doan Su~

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Tuesday, May 5, 2009 making-sweetness

Same Essays from Mr. Caldwell

I would like to write this work down ^__^ It is an interesting explaination essay and persuasive so yeaa...

Polio was a major problem in last century. We want people to understand the value of vaccinations. This vaccine saves the lives of million of people around the world. For many years, patients had suffered, and died with little or no hope. It was still to soon for the breakthrough.
People feel hoped for a miracle. More and more victims became sick and could not leave their beds. Numbers of the severe cases ended in death. As a result, a bunch of them discovered the diseases had destroyed their bones. A big problem was that we understand too little about this illness. Numerous nurses and doctors were afraid of working with these patients. Therefore, hope began to vanish.
Some medical researchers had better ideas. A leader among them was Dr. Jones Salk. He saw patterns in many patients. In a laboratory, he started studying them. In facts, he found what was cripple them. we had no medicine for destroyed bones. He looked at their situation from several angles. So, he imagined a vaccine that might sovle that part of their disease.
He undestand polio completely. his team designed a medication that conquered this disease. He recieved the Nobel Prize in Medicine. He is the hero of our story. Finally, Salk has become one of the most highly respected names in the history of medicine.

We Need Physical Exercise or Life Heathier

Our fitness is too litte. It is nessary for us to change our attitude. Our health depends on exercise. This is important because we choose to keep our bodies in good condition. It is not wise to ignore the demand of nature.
It is time for us think about over well-being. We prefer to take care of ourselves. If we do not , medical problem start to develop. Everyone can become over-weight. This is the first step in the wrong direction. As a result, fat ones too often find they have arthritis. This one usually lead on diabetes. its companion in high blood pressure. If we see this tragic situation, it may not be too late to change the bad habits. In fact, a good idea is to discuss it with a medical doctor.
Do not repeat the errors often of other people. Set up a plan for getting exercise on a regular basis. Fast walking can be pleasant for many of us. Avoid smoking, illegal drugs, fattening foods, and liquor. In the end, you feel refreshed with your improved body.

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